Well, the story is good. Translation has errors but is readable. But as we uncover more and more characters, I start to realize that they're all females. They're all peverted simpletons. Then I realize, that despite the lack of such tags, this is another ecchi haram novel.Maybe a good one if you're into that. But I figured you should know ahead to time.
If this doesn't deserve a review, what does? Rhetorical question please do not stoop down and correct a potato. Let the potato speak his words freely. The potato needs chapters as evolution material as he is a high ranking potato. He is actually the #0 ranker, check it. I'm just rambling for 140 characters.
I feel like this could be a good story but once again Chatgpt or another AI took a large part in writing this. The vocabulary and the way the scenes are described just feels unnatural and too deep for a fantasy novel. Maybe if you used a bit less AI and more of your own writing skills this could be better
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