Author, please stop rewriting the story and make it larger with more chapters it doesn't really matter about the rest. I know you may be saying its not good enough but trust me it is
I've read at least 4 similar CNs. One is called "Take his wife and daughter to cultivating immortals" It sounds very similar to this one. I hope this gets translated. Well as long as it's executed correctly... Too many gems out there that might never see the light of day for us English speakers..
The first couple of chapters are horrendously translated. It gets better later on but it’s still not great. Also the story isn’t consistent. One chapter he upgrades an artifact from 1 minute of usage to 100 minutes. A few chapters later it’s back to 1 minute. In another chapter it states a beast is a mid gold tier. In the next paragraph it says early gold tier.Also, at this point im confused on a lot of things. Is the only thing that has matters is how high of a quality a pet is? How do pets get stronger? Can a lower quality pet with a higher grade defeat a higher quality one? Not much is really explained for most things; it’s very vague. Overall it’s fine if you just skim through it without thinking too much. As long as you ignore the plot holes and sub-par translation you could read this as a way to pass time.
I'm not sure what to say. But I will say one thing for sure. This story SUCK. god, it sucks. the author is trying to be mysterious by it getting stupid. I will say one thing for sure, this story has no beat. it simply getting boring.
i like the world background...and it is very detailed and MC is given powers.. over the top... and lets see how this will go but till now.. i like the concept and development of story... and note making him too strong and wanting him to become strong without too much help.. i like the idea of this
Loved the story. MC isn't a douche who only cares about getting in girls pants. The romance isn't unrealistic, the way MC gets girls is at least believable. The story is not just about sex. Overall author did a good job.
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