It is nicely written story so far with very good English used with little repetition of certain phrases. The struggles of the MC were vividly expressed the only thing that was missing was more chapter.
Going up the ramp Rei saw the surface of the ship and there were 3 compartments or rather 3 main areas while at the edges if the ship are 20 groves each containing a cast iron canon
Mr. Gio was the history teacher, and was known for his strict sense of punctuality. If you were even a minute late, you were considered absent, and forced to sit outside of the classroom for the duration of the class. He lived by the saying: "It's better to be an hour early, than a minute late."
"Ah, Julie it's nice to see you again. I came here to see Saki's newborns and to deliver these towels from the washers." He saw a smile on her piggish face which made her seem years younger than what she was actually.
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