Comment by PASSIVESPAMMER Here we go again another pussy beta male mc who wants to hide behind the scenes.90% of novels follow this smae boring plot dropping this hot garbage and dropping novels on a whole. Evey book i read mc has to hide his identity why is it a trend? It's fing cliche.
ok. honest review here:the story is absolutely unique and interestingspecially the part of the wise old man as themain character.But unfortunately it has some problems. itmay not be problem, more like not my cup oftea. the story is lacking in terms of action andadventure. the first 20 chapter is all about purecraftsmanship and after some time it becameboring. I mean it's good to learn about newthing. but when sewing a dress take a fewchapters for the job to be done and most of theinformation about the process of creating thedress is forgeted by most readers and has nopoint in the future plot-development then thechapters will become with no purpose and youcan skip them. anyway if you are that type ofperson who enjoys the calm novels without anycliffhanger then this is good novel for you.
This is a weird split with martial art and video games. The reason it is weird is that this is mainly a martial arts book with the mc telling of his video game experience (I exaggerate, but it is how it feels). This is very unusual because usually novels will make it the other way around. Don't be fooled by the description, this is not a video game focused book with a martial arts background, martial arts is the focus.As for the book out of the game, it is fairly descent. A bit lacking in describing stages of cultivation, but is more or less fine. The is some evil underground threat looming over that is not really expanded on. The thing I find weird is there seem to only be genius cultivators from the young people and no one older has special talents or abilities and are only strong due to time, but the out of game story is not half bad.As for the video game portion, I will start by saying I usually like video game light novels, but this one seems plain sloppy. Very little detain is given about the game mechanics and the insanely high numbers with no context annoys me. It usually is along the line of: the mc just took 738,000 damage at level 30 and he is fine even though at level 1 he had 1000 hp. There is nothing concrete about the game, except the skills which have a description but have a relatively long cool down (say 20 second) but he uses every attack. I don't know about you, but even I can run 10 meters and attack 3 times in 20 seconds (I would not likely hit but I could do it), but he uses this skill to attack an opponent attacks 3 times, killing the opponent and uses the same skill again immediately after. It really makes the mc feel underwhelming when you think, even a lazy unathletic person like me could do that... What is so special about that.
Came here looking for the fantasy version of legendary mechanic but I found a retarded version of Night Ranger instead. Seriously Npc are dumber than rocks and translation is just bad.
After reading 50 chapters I would like to say a couple of things. The writing isn’t the best however still readable. However the update stability looks quite good and the plot progression was a little unique, but I honestly have no idea where the author is going with the romance, Adriana who is the fl loves both the mc and the prince which decreased my immersion quite a bit and the fight scenes are not really that vivid to the mind. There are good things as well such as that the mc appears to have a hidden backstory which didn’t appear in the novel and the interaction between characters appear quite realistic. Overall quite a decent read I would have liked to read more before making the review but I ran out of passes and There are a lot of chapters left, so if there had been more free chapters that would have been better.
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