I literally only read like three pages and the grammar was so ba di checked if it was an original by someone learning English. Because, you know, I can at least understand that.But no. This is a paid translation.Not worth. Get an editor, or a better translator.I'd honestly be better off with MTL, in my opinion. It'd probably be the same quality but the words would get translated exactly.
I really hate the fact that we have to wait for the story to catch up to the original I already read up past chap 100 I say the story to me is a lot better than demons diary becuse it devolpes faster
where is fucking chapter man? 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Shameless Author review my last novel was a dude because while I could imagine and plan out later arcs the beginning was too hard to right. This one will be different so try and stick for the ride.
A very interesting start, the storytelling style is unique and quite epic. Probably at the beginning, there is not enough specifics, but then the author gradually reveals his ideas. Good luck!
Very interesting concept! I’m impressed! The chapters are a reasonable length and grammar/writing is fair. I really enjoy the idea of Supplying a battle zone. it reminds me of Gourmet Food Supplier of Another World, but with a more sci-fi feel to it.Very nice!
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