Time-Traveling to the Seventies : My Troublemaker Husband is Full of Secrets

I know I've never been a reliable author with all of my abrupt stops and breaks, writing various novels and not finishing even a single one of them.

The women cheered. "Take it off! Take it off!"

An hour later, it began to rain heavily. The skies were as dark as the night and lightning flashed through the sky, frying a bird that flew by. The trees on the roadside looked dark and gloomy and so did the sign which said: Welcome to Proxy Pracs. "Who in their right mind, would name a village Proxy Pracs? Is that even a name?"

There's a high possibility that he won't accept it but I hope he will...

"So you didn't enjoy the time" I whispered slightly annoyed

"I know, wow so wonderful" said JH While inhaling the fresh air.

It starts out as smut with idiot MC, and (at chapter 137) ends with a hyper stoic MC that trusts no one. It feels like two different stories. The first couple of chapters it’s about the system he gets and by chapter 100 the system is completely forgotten. The characters are not fleshed out and emotions and deep painful subject matter is handled poorly.

This story is absolutely amazing! The depth of the characters and the intense plot had me hooked from start to finish. Each chapter leaves me wanting more, and Dinis’s evolution surprises me at every turn. I’m eagerly waiting for new chapters. Congratulations on the incredible work!

Yo, the shameless author here, thanks for opening and reading my story.Write you criticism, suggestions and help me to write good contentThanks ధన్యవాదాలు  धन्यवाद  ありがとう  谢谢