Time on the Run 2

Good book. I like the author's ramblings at the end of the chapters. It kind of gives an inkling into the mind and character of the author. Just hope the author's laziness doesn't after the release rate.

Terrible world building especially the description of a modern military organization and modern soldiers. The mc magically has access to a system that gives him perfectly loyal slaves who are subordinates with no depth and magically automatically pledge undying loyalty once bought

This is hands down one of the best original  fanfics.  just need to update More regularly.  You can actually feel the characters and the plot is too good.

@instagram Nathanisontheway4I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come!Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Chen rui straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself . I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality.For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :)As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping.I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)

Dude there is actually just 356 chapters but they are divided so much that there is 700+ chapter here...how to milk the reader from their money.....

Looking at his eldest daughter who was walking away with her maidservants, XuanLi had mixed feelings. He did not know if her arrival was a good thing or not.

All the guard on the wall kneels down immediately in front of him.

A bullet went pass his head.