Threads of Venom

I really enjoyed the beginning chapters. i normally don’t enjoy systems but it definitely sounds good so far. I hope you focus more on the world building. And you did good at conveying emotions

Looks good. I love it...........................................................................................................................................................................

Kudos to the translation team for being able to focus long enough on translating such a poorly written novel.  As far as translation issues go, the only odd thing I've noticed is that "Orc" might be "Beastman" in the beginning, but the author doesn't give us any information to clarify it.The story is so badly written, it's easier to read it as a satire, but it's still really bad.  The MC has no depth whatsoever and is like a kid with ADHD who has no goals or biological needs or anything.  He's overpowered in only the first few chapters.  Plot holes are everywhere, even just in the first ten chapters.  There are barely an explanations about anything that's going on.  There are many moments which will leave you wondering what exactly the creator of this series was thinking.Although there is a game setting, very few details and descriptions are given about it.  The dialogue with NPCs is absent.  There is no action or adventure described.  The story just says the MC does things or kills something.  If you are here because you like action, adventure, gaming, or comedy series, this is definitely not for you.I don't know what strong points this series has, but I don't have the patience to try reading it any longer.

a great book                                                                                                                                                                  

This is the most dramatic thriller ever, such horrors that some children have to face is awful. Hope the world gets better.Trigger Warning.

Una entretenida lectura. Tiene sus alto y bajos pero realmente vale la pena. En lo personal me encanta hasta el momento.😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

I honestly think this is really good. The writing isn’t amazing but I like the storyline. I hope that the writer is consistent with the uploads and I believe that this could become a really great story

The amazing sloth does it again with another masterpiece creation! Does his wittiness know no bounds?!  Does his ability to enthrall the reader in endless enjoyment ever cease?! Um well no it doesn’t... GREAT JOB!!! I hope you win the WPC you deserve it!  Everyone gIve this man your powerstones!