author, please tell me you do not intend to make a harem of 7 or 10 I can barely deal with 2 so that would just ruin me also is he a pervert that only wants women or thinks about them all the time or just treat them differently also I just want an answer to read this I am sure it would be great
This is the first cultivation based story I have read and I'm honestly surprised how well the cultivation system is set up. The story builds nicely to each climax or new level of power without using too much in the way of plot armor. The thoroughly explained pieces of the world are well defined but there is enough left to the imagination to feel imaginatively invested. Would recommend
Overall the idea of your novel is good, I like all the characters, I like the mansion and the way you added grey color enhanced its beauty .Best of luck😇
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Straight into my library. The novel is very good.World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't knowUpdating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author. Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.
"Well, I don't really know. I was just out with my Uncle and Scarlett. Then something happened, Scarlett went inside the forest and I looked for her, but it seems we missed each other on my way. So in the end I became lost in the forest. I thought that instead staying at place, I should walk north and follow the star to the center, so when my Uncle search, he'll also search in the most obvious place." I told them and then they look at me then to each other.
The girl's words made Jing Ming Yue start. Jing Ming Yue turned around and glance doubtfully at the girl, and asked in a curious tone, "Xiaole, why do you say that?"
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