The Yandere Came During the Night

This is my first completed novel, and it was an incredible experience! I have no complaints about the overall plot or progression. However, there were some minor details that were confusing at times, but that's a minor issue. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the translated versions as they become available.

The storytelling is absolutely brilliant, and if I had to pick a standout feature, it would be Siyu - her character development was fantastic. It truly speaks to the quality of the writing when even supporting characters like her can touch your heart.

I truly appreciate this portrayal of transmigration. The FL exhibits a straightforward nature, unapologetic about embodying the ideal "virtuous woman" of the past, yet she prioritizes her own happiness and those she cares about. This approach is invigorating. Kudos to the translator for bringing this captivating story to our attention!

I finished reading the machine-translated version within two days and am eagerly awaiting the final translation to relish it once again.

What I particularly enjoy is the development of female supporting characters who aren't purely evil, like the FL's older sister. Initially, she might seem foolish, but the author skillfully portrays her growth through the trials she faces. Watching her confront and defeat the original male lead (OFL) twice is an iconic scene.

The grandmother is a fantastic character, exemplifying the strong, caring matriarch she should be. She fiercely supports her family, including the FL and Siyu, planning for their future with warmth. Initially, she may resist the idea of their relationship due to their upbringing as siblings, which feels authentic. Ultimately, she accepts and becomes the doting grandmother eagerly awaiting her great-grandchild.

The male lead (ML) receives a more substantial background here. While he is described as attractive, the author devotes space to detailing his struggles, making him a complex and compelling character. His yandere and possessiveness towards the FL, especially in wanting her to reunite with her birth family just three days before the wedding, adds depth to their dynamic.

Overall, this story offers a delightful balance of characters and themes, and I'm grateful for the translator's work in bringing it to life.

This is a compelling historical drama with a touch of tragedy. The protagonist, FL, possesses an auspicious fate (buddha destiny) but finds herself reborn as a supporting character in a novel. Initially, it seems like a grim situation, but her genuine connection with her half-brother (ML) saves her from her fate. As she grows to understand his unwavering dedication to their family's survival and shares his struggles within the imperial court, their bond deepens.

FL's "twin," the original female lead, turns out to be a conniving villain, driving the intense, tumultuous plot. FL's character is strong yet not domineering; she's fierce, loyal, and virtuous, making her narrative engaging. If you enjoy stories set in ancient China, filled with political intrigue, family rivalries, and royal drama, this novel offers a satisfying read.

If you're after a captivating tale of revenge with unlikable characters, this might be your cup of tea. The female lead and male lead exhibit unsympathetic traits, along with the grandmother, antagonists, and pretty much everyone else – it's challenging to pick a side since they're all sociopathic. Surprisingly, the FL's maids stand out as the saner ones amidst the chaos.

I found this quite engaging. Your character, Xiang, was both amusing and poignant, evoking a range of emotions. When she exhibited boldness, I couldn't help but look away. I chose to skip the intimate scenes, as they're not my preference. It would have been intriguing to explore a side story or additional chapter delving into how her brother from our world continued his life.

I would rate this book 3.5 stars. It's an average read with a lackluster plot and unremarkable characters. I really couldn't connect with the main character (MC). She comes across as extremely rude and arrogant, often being harsh towards others just because they don't like her. She doesn't seem inspiring, constantly fixated on her older brother and not striving for personal growth. There were moments when I found her tolerable, but overall, her character felt dull. I prefer a calmer and composed protagonist, like the one in "Tyrannical Wang's Beloved Wife." The romance was touching, but the constant reference to them as siblings – "eldest brother" and "younger sister" – despite their deep affection, made it feel incestuous. This aspect frustrated me, as it detracted from the sweetness of their relationship. Unfortunately, it didn't resonate with me, hence the 3.5-star rating.

"It's fantastic for me. I'm not particularly concerned about the dynamic between the main character (MC) and the leading lady (ML), perhaps because I've encountered similar storylines in other novels before. The plot is exceptional; it's well-structured without any rushed or gaping plot holes, maintaining a perfect pace."

"I appreciate the characters, although there are a few with lower IQs that initially bother me. However, I've grown accustomed to it, so it doesn't overly distract me."

"The only aspect that left me emotionally conflicted was the MC's leniency towards their servants in the early stages for seeking revenge. At that point, I found myself empathetically struggling with their actions. Nevertheless, since the story has concluded, I'll put that aside. Overall, it's been a delightful read."

"Hello everyone! First and foremost, I just want to express how much I adore this novel! The intelligent female protagonist, the fantastic male lead, and the incredible supporting character – all are simply amazing. The romance and conflicts are captivating, and I couldn't be happier with the story. I'm truly grateful to both the translator and the author for allowing me to enjoy this masterpiece. Thank you so much ❤️!"

"4.5 out of 5 stars! For those who enjoy historical Chinese settings, intricate political intrigue, and exploring the complexities of societal and family customs, this book is definitely worth a read! It's clean, with subtle romantic undertones rather than explicit content. The romance earns a 3.5-star rating from me – it's mixed, with moments of cuteness, possibly due to the young age of the female protagonist. Since this is my first ancient China translation, I might be comparing it differently."

Both the ML (Machine Learning) and FL (Federated Learning) approaches have a clear understanding of their objectives and are unapologetic about it. It's an enjoyable read.

I can no longer continue reading due to the sexual content. Despite initially finding the plot intriguing, I am puzzled by the FL's (a 12-14-year-old protagonist) perception of the ML as her twin brother from her previous life, while also viewing him as a means to secure wealth as a 'step-sister.' However, as the story progresses, there are numerous inappropriate and disturbing sexual scenes that deviate from the yandere character trope. Instead, the ML comes across as creepy, fixated on the FL's young age, which is unsettling.

The dialogue between them includes possessive statements like "you're mine, brother," "I want to stay with you forever," and the ML agreeing to not marry, seemingly going against the FL's earlier plan to peacefully separate and reunite with her original love interest. It's hard to accept that the FL, who is portrayed as intelligent and calculating, wouldn't be aware of her brother's true intentions.

In conclusion, while the plot holds some appeal, I advise skipping over the sexual aspects, as they detract from the story.

The narrative is indeed excellent, but I find the yandere label somewhat misplaced, as the character does not exhibit typical yandere traits. He might have a slightly toxic side, but that's the extent of it.