The mc is a little dumb,he's not what I call careful because there is nothing to be careful at,you don't know exactly why he want to be low-key,you don't see the danger.When you want to show the mc has a need to be careful,show us the danger,the reason why he need to be careful and not paranoid assumptions. We can't see the danger,being overly careful is just buying the story time because the author don't know how to make the mc not too OP so he make petty excuses such as "carefulness" we don't need.The mc can have more ressources with being libelled as a genius than losing time in weak dungeons.
The MC from an ordinary world travelled back in time, but he arrived in a parallel reality where martial arts exist and have a heavy influence in society. It is similar to World’s Best Martial Artist, but I would prefer not to compare it to that trash.His cheat allows him to simulate a world and assume the identity of a random person there. 10 years in there was equivalent to a moment in the real world, so you would expect a mature MC. At this point, It is similar to 48 hours a day.Also, his experience in the simulation was not just some filler, the plot is actually well thought out. It is a decent read.
Out of all the modern cultivation stories I have read I would rate this the best. Mainly because the character hasn't reincarnated from anywhere and isn't constantly offending people. The story unfolds in a pretty organic way and isn't rushed or slow.
I liked the premise but after reading 25 chapters, the novel is more of a vrmmo wuxia novel with too few actual "constable" work. Thus far, it has developed like the stereotypical wuxia novel with all the damsels-in-distress type stuff and I kinda just got bored of it.
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Writing quality is goodWell designed charactersGood background setting. Chapter update stability is goodOverall the book is good. Keep up the good work author
Definitely an underrated story that deserves more views. Characters feel real and like they actually have personalities. Nobody is one-dimensional, and that's an immediate five stars from me. Read this, you won't be disappointed, I promise!
A good read.....but I want to ask the author one thing....if he is already so powerful.......to be equal to the world's strongest how the story will progress. I mean there should have been two categories for power.....but you have shown talent as power system also......his starting point is labelled as S while he has SSS and to get SSS he needs to just do missions so that he don't get ego on his head.......then in few chapters he will easily become world's strongest......I think a different power rank and talent should have been there....
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