The World Beyond the Eye

trash with bad plot and awful translation                                                                                                                 

isn't this just a rip off of Library of Heaven's Path? seems like it could be interesting but as of now it's highly flawed and no real reason for many things

The author is a native English speaker based on his profile. So, my review of this webnovel is going to be more in line with that expectation and not the typical translation trash that litters this website. Writing Quality- There's a few grammar mistakes but nothing too serious. Story Development- For a while there the MC has some cultivation level dialogue going on and some typical thot in distress. But, the biggest issue this webnovel has is the set up itself. Presently the MC is playing a beta test version of the game and it's been 70+ chapters. Like a normal person would think, once the beta ends all the data is going to be wiped. So that means almost the entirety of the story written until then is going to be a waste unless some BS story development occurs to change common sense. Then we either have to deal with watching the MC rebuild his religion as some Nordic god again or deciding to be something else. Character Design- There's some cultivation type characters which is pretty low brow everything considered. Updating Stability- Consistent or maybe not? As a guy who's written 400+ chapters he spends an inordinate amount of time DCMA-ING bots that copy and paste his chapters onto other websites. Even threatens us the readers and not the bots he'll stop writing if the pirating doesn't stop. World Background- It's fine, but the author wastes too much time having the MC go on adventures and fighting in dungeons. The guy is a god, not some two bit adventurer. He should be out spreading his faith, doing miracles, or god forbid fathering kids in the mortal realm like a typical god. Just seriously, this beta test smorgasbord is do or die for this webnovel. If I was the author, I'd just wrap this up within ten chapters and than choose one of the typical demi-human races like the elves, dwarves, or the beastmen. Humans are overdone, especially since you've already chose them during the beta test, you've done orcs in your other webnovel, and the probably villainous race "primal whatever" just seems a bit lazy since you get to make up everything about a made up race.

The f man, i was expecting a good fanfic atleast and the hell is this??!! Its like your just copying the originals and just edit a few things while not affecting how things would go

good story, good grammarsoooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood

Different story from all other stories in the story telling apps.especially the female lead character is relatable and having all the normal human nature.writing is amazing .this story give make u cry but the will power of the heroine face the situation is commandable.this story is comes under the category which as reader u will remember forever. This is the first story of the author but the work she is doing really amazing....and this is telling truth "no one is perfect in this world every one have their own flaws "Example is our female lead not white washing her .she is relatable with normal human characteristics.

it's a great story and it has developed a lot since I first started reading it. definitely think others should give it a read.

"Luminous Lock..."