ever gonna come back and finish? was a great and engaging story. felt genuinely different which was a nice change of pace. it's been 9 months since last updated.
an excellent chapter I look forward to what is in store for our skeletal friend in the next chapter (this part was type for the sole reason of getting enough words to post a review)
Synopsis is wrong, but beyond that, I liked this book very much. Hope it continues. Those who are complaining that MC has a weird sense of item value, what I feel like is the system itself evaluated them as trash. It has nothing to do with the MC.
English is good. Even if it is not good, it's sufficient. This is my favorite genre, yet, I still stopped reading half way through .First, divide paragraphs. If it's this blocky on PC for me, I could imagine how unbearable it will look to mobile users. It's fine to leave two lines of gap between paragraphs. it looks alright. The story progression is good, keep at it, it will work out well.
Hi, the author here. It's my first novel guys. I am pretty inexperienced about but I will try to become better at this. I hope you will enjoy this novel.
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