could not get past the translation. "there were factories not used by factories, gyms used as currency" was too much for me to handle. Even cursory editing done by a middle schooler would have been enough to fix the incorrect pronouns, calling a bike a donkey, and other random incomprehensible sentences.
Can you tell me what happen with the updates ? Is this novel in hiatus ? It's been 2 weeks since the last updates. I like this novel, the story is good but the updates are to slow.
this book is amazing as of rn. there are many things he could do but tbh its pretty good i wouldnt mind if he didnt explain the people a bit deeper in the future though.
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I wish you don't make it sci-fi like that mad scientist though because that's kinda not my cup of tea.. Okay? Btw i like how it resembles that story cause it had stopped early because of authors sisters' wedding what not that took 6 months lol . I'm expecting a good novel out of this okay sooo good luck and thanks for your hardwork btw please don't dropped it cause that's the thing i hate.
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