The author here was a great story ,some story developement and character developement , the only think that i didnt like was the dinamic between the female lead and the male lead, this is my opinion and is biased because i hate josei(i dont know what is called the reverse of this instead of being the female lead weak is the male lead) type of storys and this story feels like this, if i was the mc and had the chance to run away from the female lead i would run, i will continue reading because the author does a great job to make me entretained through the story, but i expect some developement from the male lead.
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The story developments is very interesting and keeps the reader intrigued and interested. In addition, the stability of updates is excellent. The writing quality is also good but the author needs to make it longer so the reader doesn't get too impatient.
The guard said "Sure My lord,by the way I'm The Guards Captain here I'm pleased to know you my lord my name is Thalenie, If you ever need something that i can do i'll do my best to fulfill your demand .as for the matter of guiding you this my son, Oscar, He will guide you to his majesty's Palace". Oscar bowed while saying " I will be escorting you my lord to his majesty's Palace , Please follow this lowly one " . I said to Thalenie "Thank you for your service you're really someone that can be relied on keep up the good work ." then I turned to Oscar and said "Let's go Oscar and thank you for escorting me ." . And so I got through the town's street and saw magnificent old buildings the same as those of the medieval time it was fascinating after walking for some minutes were finally at the entrance of the Palace . One of the robust guards approached Oscar to ask him about me and I waiting them to inform the king to give me permission to enter the palace and meet him . I waited for 20 minutes in the entrance of the Palace before getting permission it was really cool outside as it was the 4th of April according to the game calendar . As I entered the Grand hall reserved for feast and nobles meeting i saw the king sitting on his throne and looking at me while he had a simple smile on his face he was a man in his 50's nonetheless he was still quite handsome. He said to me " Who are you young man? and what's the matter you wanted to talk to me about?" I said respectfully "I am Jack Labersten My lord at your service.I came here today in order to ask you if you had any task for me ? " The king stood up , glanced at me and said " You're brave young man to not be afraid in the presence of this king . For the moment I don't any tasks for you but if a task presents itself I'll remember to send someone to inform you, you can go now young man ." He said and turned around." I said " I must beg my leave." He said with a smile on his face " Farewell young man.".I exited the Palace and asked Oscar who was still waiting me " Oscar, can you guide me to the arena." .He looked at me with a weird look in his eyes and the end he responded respectfully "Sure, My lord" He thought "Why do this noble wants to go to the arena I did never see nobles fighting there" . In our way to the arena I asked Oscar about the arena's time of opening and how it works he explained to me that the arena opens from the morning till the night and that the rewards based on your tier the ranking was :
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