The Virtual Swordsman: Eternity Online

It's a good concept from what I've read so far. However it needs deeper world building and character design with more detailed arcs. Some fights were barely a paragraph long and most chapters ended in the same way.

Pretty good overall but needs deeper world building in the first few chapters. I  can see the author has tried to to change these in the latest chapters but idk if they can change it for the old ones so that new readers can understand the concept but it’s alright overall

author improved most of the suggestions that were said by other people so now the book looks pretty promising and has a good future

Bussin novel, reading it everyday like its my life support, I love how it is updating everyday, i need this novel to keep me sane, highly recommended

Absolutely phenomenal story, it was as if this was the cure to my cancer. This book was filled with fantasy coming inside.

Great Novel so far. I’d like to see more character development though. And maybe some more sensory appeal, but absolutely amazing idea and execution so far. (I also love how the novel is getting updated frequently, I am genuinely invested in this right now)

Pretty good icl, the first chapter was interesting and engaging, hopefully the quality stays consistent and the writer changes colours in the future

Amazing story line and writing, the character development is phenomenal, the worlds are described perfectly and the idea of the whole book is so creative,