The Violet Warlock

The author here, you know what it is. This is going to be my first proper original story I plan to finish. Check it out and feel free to leave a review if you enjoy.

yea this is it

Once more, another perfect blend of popular tropes and cultures. It really ties it all together quite well. Not to mention your wording and original terminology really make me excited to see more of what this story has to offer. Excited to finish it all!

This book saved my life. Before I read this book, I had AIDS and was going to die. I never came to accept the fact that I was going to go, so I fell into a deep depression. I couldn’t handle the thought. What I was doing was unhealthy, and everyone picked up on the fact that I was in complete denial. They all tried to get help for me, but I turned it all down because I told myself that I didn’t need help.

“You’re going to be fine,” I told myself. “Nothing's wrong. It’s all in your head...” until the thought of death finally came to me and took over the entirety of my personality. “I don’t want to go...” “I DON’T WANT TO GO” “I DON’T WANT TO GO.”

All the help my family had tried to give me had failed, and it was all because of my depression and denial. I could’ve gotten help, but I kept telling myself there was nothing wrong. I grew sicker, and sicker, and sicker... until I became so sick I could not get out of bed. My skin grew dry and pale, I grew skinny and weak. I could barely move and was constantly coughing up blood. I tried to come to accept the fact that I was going to die, but I couldn’t.

Then I officially got the news that I would die in 12 hours when I woke the next day. I cried and cried all day until my daughter walked up to my bed. She said very tearfully, “We really tried, Dad. We did everything we thought of. There’s only one thing left that I can do...” She passed me a copy of Violet Warlock.

“What’s this?” I asked. “The only option we have left...” she said as she walked out of the room and slowly closed the door behind her. I picked up the copy of Violet Warlock and looked at the cover. The art on the cover was absolutely gorgeous. I was completely speechless at how stunning the cover was and how it conveyed such a big message with one simple piece of artwork.

I opened up the book to what would end up being the most heart-racing, realistic, and emotional adventure I'd ever go on. The characters felt so much like real people, and I found myself full-on crying multiple times because of how the characters got me caught up in the story like it was actually happening. It felt real. After reading the book, I was so extremely grateful that I got to witness what might be the best work of literature on earth the night before I had to leave it.

After reading the book, I became cleansed. I felt truly at peace with everything. I sat by my bed, getting ready for eternal slumber. Once I went to bed, I had two more hours. My body would give up before the morning, and that’d be it. I finally lay down and quietly said to myself, “I’m okay with this...” as I slowly drifted off to sleep. This is it. This is my end.

Until... I woke up. I looked out the window and saw that it was morning. I was so confused and was sure that this was a dream and not reality, but sure enough, it was. I started sobbing tears of joy. I saw my doctor, and he said that even though there was no treatment that I took, my AIDS had completely vanished. He said that suddenly, I was the healthiest I’ve ever been and that I now have no clear sign of death. I would live a long and happy life, and I’m not sick anymore.

“What happened? What did you do to get rid of it?” he asked. I told him, “Look up Violet Warlock on Google Play. I didn’t conquer death, it did. And trust me... it’s way more than a book.” Violet Warlock saved my life. I could not be more thankful for this masterpiece. If Joel is reading this review, I want him to know that you have conquered death. Thank you.

Good i like it, but a bit too girlish for my taste.
Being a man i don’t really like the interactions she sometimes has, but maybe I am not the targeted audience as I don’t read books with female MC.
Good luck

The story's a lot more interesting than what I thought it'd be, the story sets a base for the protagonist to grow and doesn't immediately make her overpowered like other novels normally do. The main character is pretty interesting and the way the world is told in the beginning is good too. Overall a pretty good novel but it's just beginning so who knows how it'll turn out.

Fantastic! I’ll have to tell the rest of my family about this. I’m really impressed with the use of more eastern tropes in your writing. You’ll have to write more for the other potatoes to be fully satisfied!

You’re a great author love your work it’s all very well put together amazing read, huge thanks to you for not accepting any contract if given the chance for us to be able to read this! [img=update]