The villain wants to live

Stopped reading at chapter 63 (almost all of the free chapters) and my verdict is that this story is.....annoying.Annoying in that the author is constantly teasing readers by not revealing the ML's status to everyone this whole time. The reason it's annoying is because a person that is as stupidly stubborn towards their own family as the FML exists. And she has a husband who has the power to fix all the problems, but loves her so much that he wants her to show everyone what she is made of. So the problem is that the characters are realistic, and that they've just been running around this problem for so long now, all so that the author can write in face-slapping events. IMO, since he wants her to show how great she is to everyone, it could still be easily solved by publicizing his status, and then giving her free reign over her own companies to spread her wings.Other than that, the story starts off a bit awkwardly in that it doesn't talk about his coming-up story, and although not perfect, there are very few grammatical errors, so it isn't hard to read. The world is a mix of modern day and fantasy, with mentions of modern companies and whatnot

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This novel has been really good so far.. I've read about 67 chaps.. the way the characters are written is refreshing.I'll be waiting for more chapters :)

This is a great read to be honest. Only issue is the writing format of the dialogue which I believe can be improved, but overall great book.

I think I can see where thr story is going and I love it. It is a new take on the genre and it is what I have been lookong for. The only critique (if you can even call it that 😓) is that the tragedy aspecg seems a little forced but other than that I love it 👍

Shame doesn't feed you, so there's no point in having shame.Try it, you won't regret it.Also, you might want to read this when you're alone...Along with wearing baggy pants...

Everyone back in the military never liked sneak attacks, but Jack is a different matter. For him, they are what you call strategies.