the story is nice but it seems to jump in places, causing the story to seem choppy.and what are even the dollsand if you explain the purpose of events it might help it flow easier
A copy of Astral pet but atleast wih this story there is pet selling. That being said... i feel like the shop isnt the actual main focus but instead just a crux for the mc to get stronger. I did not get the feel of it being an actual story about a shop owner like lets say pet king. The shop is just a thing to improve the mc. So my score is on the rather low side because of it. Quality and updates are good, story is bad and character is as well. World sounds awesome tho.For those reading the review, do give it a try to see if you do like it. (specially if you like astral... which i did not)
I love this!!I'm only on the first few chapters, but I really like how this story was set up. The quality of this story is actually much higher than a lot of the contracted novels here. There are some grammatical errors here and there, but that doesn't matter to me as long as I can grasp the story. And it's great! Keep going on this!
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