The Viiolet Ticker

Very very good

good story even if there are a some gramma errors.the mc is unnatural lucky ith drops, skills pets etc that its feels forced.mc is kind of dump to me!

Shallow characters and cliche, even shallower, plot. This novel is one of those novels that require you to turn your brain off in order to enjoy it. However, even then I couldn’t help but sigh or roll my eyes with some developments in the story. If you want a fun, easy read then this is probably not for you. If you want to read a trashy, typical, low-quality Xianxia then this is gonna he perfect for you.I should mention that the writing quality is really good and effort has clearly been put into the formatting.

I am not really good at writing reviews so please bear with me.This story is slow-paced but for me it's good because it shows different influences of different views to a child that stubbornly holds on the beliefs instilled into him by his companions as a growing child. On how he deal with the obstacles and what does he firmly believe in. In their world, decisions are important but it should also align with his beliefs as it may cause repercussions to his foundation.He is extremely decisive and that's what I like about Hei. If he resolve to do something, he will do his best to accomplish it.I wish that the author can continue writing more exciting chapters. 😊😃😁😀 Thank you!!!😄😄😄

This novel is one of the most amazing things I have picked up in recent yearsI can can boldly say that it will become an example novel for other people to write novels on modern and system category novels One of the must read I wish the writer all the best and I hope he will be as energetic as he is now 👍👍👍

Tag List:Urban Fantasy, Action, Grim Reapers, Magic, Grimoire, Ghosts, Dead Souls, Demons, Spirits, Sages, Demi-humans, Hell, Different Realms, Major 1st person POV, MC with judgemental mentality and short temper, Gradual escalation of strength / Power, Non-system/cultivation magic mechanism.Romance = There is slight romance but it's not a major focus. It's barely hinted at in the initial 3 arcs and even after that, it's a very gradual sort of thing.Plot Pace = Not going to lie, it is a slow paced story but if you stick with it, I'm sire you'll have fun the whole time. I do add in humour and world exposition and character work to make that slow pace intresting.This is a planned story. While not every event is planned out, for now the plan is to have 10 arcs, each with around 30-40 chapters (40-50k words per arc). The first two arcs will be set in the real world but after that, the story will take place in other realms.Please like this review so that others can see the tags! Thank you ^_^

Its alright for your first attempt. Keep it up for I liked it. Just don't drop it.Be stable. I think you lack the ability to explain an event pretty clearly and in a stable way. But I think you can improve it after some period. I think that you don't make grammatical mistakes and your writing is alright.

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book