The novel is awesome in every aspect. The good translation quality makes it agreeable to read this awesome novel in story development, character design and world background.The only not (totally) perfect aspect is, that the next chapter is not released on a fixed time (normaly noon in UTC+1)
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Not gonna lie, the start was pretty rough to get through(the initial first 25 chapters or so) for various reasons like the ranking system (I am a person that is bothered even by small details like this, so this might not have been as bothersome for others), some grammatical errors as I usually read only top-quality novels and the MC's edginess. However as more chapters came out the grammar improved to the point there were only a few errors noticeable in a dozen chapters or so, I stopped being bothered by the ranking system, we got more of the character's background and the MC was not as edgy as before and he actually developed as a character and made believable mistakes and decisions. The only major thing I was bothered overall was how the MC was able to dodge magic spells at the speed of a bullet and the author gave the explanation that he analyzed it and dodged it since he had the skills in the real world too. There was someone who said that even if he is able to do that, his body in the VR world will not be able to keep up with him and the author replied that since it's VR things depend more on his brain's abilities or something like that. I completely disagree with that, because the stats in VR are supposed to limit his body's movement and his agility was his lowest stat (the stats of a player that just started the game). If he could move his body in whatever way he wanted, then what will be the meaning of stats?Now I will move on to the point I liked the most in the novel - the focus on the 'real' world. I think that the best decision that the author made in the entire novel is to focus on the 'real' world as much as he did on the VR world. The other VR novels I have read are always 95% ( in the very least) VR and 5% (an exaggeration) real world. I commend the author for that.Overall the novel is worth it if you can endure the first 25 chapters or so.
Okay so Krino best boi(sword?). What you did to Tif in you know what chapter absolutely unforgivable! Enjoying the world so far can't wait to get more info on the voids.
allert, contain mb spoilers.first of all, i want to thank author. this story is good and i usualy dont writte review, and if so its negative, this is one of my few revies with positive regards.1. original, well its cliche as reincarnation or transmigration stories, but there is where cliche end. as in what mathew reincarnated, his behaviour is definitely not a cliche.2. MC itself isnt overly OP with inteligence but you definitely cant get opinion he behave in stupid way, he use logic, and usualy decision he make is for himself but with high enough morality. Also his character isndeveloping, at start he was ok being alone, but as time goes it can be seen in imaginable way (its not clearly written by author - which is ok as you got the feeling) he enjoy living in company of kobolts, but still his his priority isnhimself which is natural so not over the line thinking you touch what i hold dear and he by plot armor destroy his enemies, thats not in there = appreciated)Next world itself is still in mystery as we are still in forest, but i gues it will all be ok, as for now nothing ridiculous, so by standart this story is written i bet it will be above avarage. Writtings, author do good job in describing thing enough, and reader also dont have feeling that author use words or describing things as for idiots and believe readers have some logic to imagine details, so its not overly wasting words. and its written enough qaulity for you not miss much only for once i didnt got if he after evolution has tail still or not but in later chapters his tail was still there (there suggestion for author, tail can be used for a lot of things and for holding in ssame ay as he use tongue, i always imagined he some day fell asleap as his tail hold some branch with head down well :D) so dont forget evolvy hia tail :D, well thats just suggestion, i await where you bring us along mathew in his jurney :))only thing my review dont end in 5 start ratings is this:upload chapters, i couldnt give full as i just catch up to latest chapters so i ccant ive opinion how much annoy me for waiting for chapters or if its good updating.Story development i gave only 4, but its should be 5 but i cant give max as its still early only 100+ chapters and we are still in forest.ps.: whats ffore big good point is there isnt some female cliche (and as he is chameleon looking as kobolt its not dangerous there will be one, so not some guy who is followed some women who mysteriously keep getting stronger without some plots armors, so good to read story like that.i read novels for like 20 years now, and this one is potentionaly for me in top 10, its too early for that decision ffor e but still my word is, thank you author for the sstory rlly enjoy it.
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I really liked how there was the essence of everything I liked, just needed a couple more details to paint the environment(like when they were on the lump of flesh dragon passing through several countries while doing the deed it would be nice to hear about all the climates they’re passing through) , maybe a ting more detail when the mysterious magician loses her husband and kid, it sparked my curiousity as to why she was so cold, but the way it was worded about the lack of feelings in her eyes left too much out. Really can’t complain about anything because it covered all my core likes about LNs. The scene at the beach made me add to the library in preparation for all the exploring they’l be doing in an unknown world(s). You’ve got a great start and I know your writing will only get better.
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