The Unseen Colors of Mana: White Eyes

I don't think that there was something bad with your story. It was a nice story and I think that the others were thinking the same too. Anyways, I hope that you will keep writing it and reach your goal with the story!

Another Novel from one of our famous author of culture, MyLittleBrother.Even his username is a cultural pun ! Do not underestimate his little brother.

Only read this if you want to lose all of your brain cells.

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published by dog and I felt powerful in a det to the right of my life I was in the same as I was wrong and the grass is so I left it was a good friend to me but the glitched

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An entertaining novel to read while killing time, I love the lemon scene and it makes my lower body tense 😂, come on author, I'm waiting for the update

The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure.The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels.As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.