The Tyrant’s Warrior Bride

The premise was interesting as one of the few sect building stories on this platform, but the execution was ... questionable with a lot of grammatical errors and the story doesn't weave together well. The story has potential but the use of english was anything but well made

well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows

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One of female angle spoke = you are all dead and you must help us protect other world as heroes.

After some drink, talk and the realisation that Motada wasn't coming back anytime soon, we all decided to head to our rented rooms for some desperately needed rest. Once I entered my room, I left my iron sword next to the door, placed my gold next to my bed and fell right on the bed, with my fatigue being so great that I couldn't even take off my chain mail.

<p>"Naga berlapis baja itu mungkin tinggal di tengah supermarket, karena itu adalah area yang paling luas" Luo Feng langsung menuju ke tengah. Perlahan, Luo Feng mulai melihat bola berbentuk oval.</p>

She groaned, but quickly bit down her lip, as if her body knew automatically that she was not supposed to make noise or show her pain.

At that moment I felt some kind of power ran through my whole body,my injury's were healing faster then ever ,my body filled with magic.My bones readjusted,as he was going to hit me again, I saw the attack coming so slow that I could even see the details on his hands .