I'm not a fan of fantasy novels, but was taking a stroll on behalf of my wife and saw this book. it's actually nice, the scenes makes you imagine everything, the description is surreal
The story is well-paced but there were some instances about the MC that really confused me as a reader. But still, it's a well-written story despite the grammar errors. And I am curious to know how the story goes.
Well written post-apocalypse esper vs aliens story. Mc rises from the despair and pain for revenge and power to control his fate.His esper ability to transfigure materials in the steampunk era mixes technology and science fiction is great creativity and not totally illogical random fantasy adds realism that you can immerse in.One of the best stories out that beat mainstream novels hands down.
I wonder why this novel is so overrated. Honestly, in my opinion, there are tons of better pet novels out there, even some lower rated novels are better than this. The more I read this the more I find it boring. Am I the weird one?
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!Looking forward to the next chapter!!!Looking forward to the next chapter!!!Looking forward to the next chapter!!!Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Based on the story so far it seams like it will be great, the Mc has reasonable dislike of organisations and so far hasn't just immediately grown overpowered because of the system he got and while he has to start with very little it's not like he started with absolutely nothing like some of the stories I've read
"I just want more." This is a simple message to the author. Please sir, release at least 5 chapters per week. That would be so awesome. This is my first web novel and tbh I'm enjoying it. After reading solo leveling manhwa this is my first time try something awesome.
Hi... I'm kind of frustrated at the moment from reading all the comments. Even though they are not rude, it still hit me since I didn't meet the readers' expectations. And as for that, please forgive me. I will still produce the best quality I could offer.This review isn't about me showing or wanting some pity. I want to the readers know that even I can't be the best writer, I'll be the most understanding writer. I'm taking all of the suggestions and reading plenty of light novels if I have time to widen my horizon, thus, I just want people to understand my concerns.This novel isn't usually a type of fantasy novel that is common or a trope that is repetitively used in the platform. I took a risk to implement such a trope so hope you appreciate it even it's not in the best of you could expect.These all I felt is something I understand. Normally, you won't receive praises every time and criticism will try to hit your shortcomings. It's helpful, I know it, however, I still can't help but feel anxious every time I see a number in my inbox (you know what I'm saying).So, instead of blabbering about my sentiments, I want to let people know that I am still an amateur. I didn't have any training or so, that's why I am still in the process of improving my work. I do mistakes. It's pretty common to me since I'm not a native English speaker (even those who are native speakers still make mistakes as 'no one is perfect').What are my mistakes in this novel? Misused adjectives and adverbs. It's not common and at least you could stumble upon those funny mistakes like 2 out of 10 chapters and 3 in a thousand. But here's a reminder, pronouns are my weakness and sometimes I can't notice such mistakes. My language doesn't have pronouns for genders so hope you understand.Warning, incorrect spelling (but rare than legendary swords). I must let you know that my language doesn't have hard spellings as our words are spelled by how we speak them.Anyway, thank you for visiting and reading this review of mine. Last warning... Awkward structure but not all are grammatically incorrect.
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