An 'OK' book, just not my cup of tea. I don't have much to say other than author's writing style felt a little confusing to me. And I didn't really like the story, not much more to say.
Ch60 - It's about basketball - it's simple - Light binge - MC - He's decent and acts his 40yr old age, hasn't used his modern knowledge yet but is aware of it, lacking a few grains in the personality departmentPlot - Simple, become a NBA player and get a fair-skinned rich and pretty wife - This is repeated a few timesAuthor - Okay but does do a narrator ramble from time to time but has done his history System - It's upgrades, which is nice but Doesn't make sense to me, feels over complicated for some reason. However the MC feels the same Side-Characters - Like a Lettuce only salad - could use more stuff on the plate Romance - None - Author does describe a 16 year as having 'sexy legs' ..... yeh
I hope the author returns. It's a great concept. It's a great novel. A novel that will make you forget reality and get lost in it. My only complaint is that the romance sucks. I was expecting more specific approaches but it was very superficial. And hopefully no more drama. Because I want the main character to have fun playing this game.
I have nothing against bl. I love the genre. But this story needs an editor really bad. And there's a lot of confusion. There isn't enough detail to fully understand things.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this ****. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a **** much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive.
Story OK. To be fair the author did say its his first novel and he isn't a native English speaker. And it shows. Badly. I've dropped it. I rarely drop books just because of writing quality but I couldn't continue.This was as bad as mtl. The bad ones. BUT if you can handle mtl or are not a native speaker then this isn't really a problem. As this was also the authors first work, other problems such as story pacing, character progression, character interaction and behaviour all needs work. Theres a lot of telling and very little showing. This comes with practice, time and experience.My advise to the author as simply a fan of light novels is to read more well written English novels. Not translated, but actual English novels. You'll pick up a lot and it'll help you construct your novels better in tbe future.For anyone who read all this and want an actual review.. Transmigration story where male MC gets into modern world with monsters. System makes him cultivate stronger. For once the original body isn't some begger or poor son which is actually refreshing. It's why I think this author with some work and experience can actually write a good novel in the future.
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