just an extra warning, this does NOT get better. I've skimmed the raws and Victoria also ends up going psycho as a result of a series of very convoluted, messy time travel shenanigans. she ends up 'cheating' on him but not really but also does (when Victoria goes missing and leaves with Jordans brother to reunite with her father (normal clarke), Jordan believes that the Howard's have her captive so he agrees to marry Lauren in order to gain info on her location, upon learning of their soon to be marriage a distraught Victoria seeks out Jordans brother and sleeps with him.... later we find out its actually just Jordan's alternate identity from when time travels back to the past.. so Jordan ends up cucking himself and therefore getting front row seats to Victorias infedility. Naturally this causes him to be repulsed by her. This leads to a rift and eventually them splitting up, then..... emotionally wrecked she marries his uncle lol.... (whom she was previously comforted (not sexually) by during Jordans supposed death <something I skipped and didn't explain>) Now she's become some superhuman with mind control abilities that has also become insane (Lauren is the only girl that remains faithful for those who are crazy enough to continue reading. oh and also some Swedish chick named Lota). All in all, don't read this garbage, it's not worth your time or money. Unless u enjoy subpar writing and an author who cannot write without just inserting convoluted, incredibly forced drama.
I hope people would start writing a proper review or synopsis. Just to give the idea to new readers on what the story is. Most of the comments here barely reviewed about anything important.Okay... I know I contradicted myself by writing this, but I just had to point it out.
First time to me (real review to novel i like)But all i can tellI thank you @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Dropped within first 15 chapters. MC is blackmailed by a person saying he is from A terrorist grouping and will turn him in if he doesn’t follow his commands. The thing is MC is not so why would he just go along with it.An example would be a random person on the street walks up too you and says your a terrorist give me all your money or I will report you. Are you just going to give it too him? No you tell him to F off.
Honestly the translation is so bad its almost unreadable. Story also seems to be a bore. Can easily tell editor isn't a native English speaker or is just horrendous at English.
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