The Suggestion of Love

The light novel is great however the romance is absolutely horrible. Are you telling me any woman who stays with the mc for a few years and comes to like him will suddenly become the mc’s ‘dao heart’ and ‘taboo for any enemies to speak her name’????? Wtf is this I thought the mc is a ruthless mc not a softhearted guy who can’t bear to leave a woman just because she likes him and got Stockholm syndrome. The only reason she became the mc’s girlfriend is because it’ll be really pitiful if she doesn’t. The only thing she does for the mc is to make pills but still schemes against him. The mc is supposedly ruthless so why didn’t he just turn her into a puppet after all the times she tries to kill him and ends up ‘being more important than his own life’ since she comes to like him, why does he have a love life anyways if he’s so ruthless, he’ll just end up getting a burden. I like how his girlfriend has no unique qualities and has done barely anything for him. The author is absolutely horrible at creating romance, pretty much like his other light novels.

Good so far.                          

Well done! Very nice plot, and good grammar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Well its a nice story . Im reading other review and agrred about the combat power the MC, the other its good ✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽✌🏽

Its good so far, the english is good nothing to complain about although there are silly spelling mistakes here and there its acceptable for a start.As for the story good turn of events not predictable atleast thats good and the descriptions are wonderful.The jokes knitted into the story are awesome for sure  hope that continues and well fucking finally the mc has a mindset that of a normal person who curses, is fearful, laughs like a maniac in stramge scenarios man so hard to find so author 0l dont change the way he is later on alright.Great going so far, waiting for more chaps!

"HADIRIN HARIRIN SEKALIAN DI KARENAKAN BAHWA SEMUA PESERTA SAAT INI TELAH DATANG DAN BERSIAP"

"Bagaimana caranya tuh, kau bisa meniduri Rina, dia kan orangnya garang dan tenaganya seperti laki-laki, kau bisa saja mengendalikan dia," ucap Rendra pada Beno.

Beasts is a group of vigilantes. They are very famous for being righteous and helping people. And last but not the least, their leader the 'Dark Beast' is one of the most renowned names of the underworld. No one has seen him, every witness refuses to go against him, not out of fear but respect. Their logo is a tiger but the leader is a lion.