After struggling, dropping the novel and then picking it up again, I’m finally quitting at 1354. I seriously have a ton of complaints but I’ll just put the main one here.The author made it too obvious that he’s just trying to drag this novel as long as possible. We all know the mc can pickup attributes, and when he picks up attributes from people stronger than him it works even better since he grows much faster, even making him jump levels earlier in the novel. However, The author basically nerfed the mc as soon as he left earth so that he could drag the story.That’s not even the main reason why I’m dropping it. The tipping point for me was during the war on the 29th defense planet. Three eternal ranked were involved in that war. The human eternal wounded one of the devils and then another showed up ready to clash. But guess what? NO ATTRIBUTE BUBBLES FROM THEM, the author didn’t even mention them dropping attribute bubbles, the story just continued like normal with the mc picking up attribute bubbles from everyone else on the battlefield. Of course, why would the author let him pickup attribute bubbles from them? This would make him get stronger too quickly, and since he just wants to milk this story as much as possible, he just didn’t want it to happen, so he just didn’t let it happen. In the earlier part of the novel the mc grew so quickly but ever since he left earth he grew SUPER Slowly, even while coming in contact with people much much stronger than him. It slowly became a novel where it’s just face slapping. Someone Looks down on mc because his level is weak, but of course, he has so many things that can make him fight across realms. Boom, their face gets slapped. I also have to mention how terrible the story became later on. The author started dragging fights that could be done in a single chapter, making them take 5-6 chapters or sometimes even more! I also can’t forget to add that the author started writing entire chapters describing information about attribute bubbles. It wouldn’t be bad if he did it like a litrpg or something but nah, it’s just a filler chapter that’s there to make up numbers.I’ve never been so angry about a novel in my life. It had so much potential at the start.I
This crap sucks I read to chapter 3 and I already quit that’s how crappy it is the mc attitude toward his parent is a asshole worst I can already predict that his fiancée is gonna fall in love with mc even though she didn’t like him and mc know they are only for money but he is still gonna take her if I’m wrong about them gonna fall in love tell me
I really tried to like this novel, having read around 200chapters here, but it never got much better to change my mind.But I will recommend you not to waste your time and money here. Its not terrible but it isn’t worth it.Romance is poorly developed and the interactions between MC and the girls are very sparse. They only happen suddenly and then important conversations are cut off. Author skips important conversations and scenes when jumping between the Game world and Real world.Sometimes things also get quite confusing with random plot elements being introduced out of nowhere with no build up.Unimportant Fight scenes are often dragged out almost like arcs in DBZ. But doing this in a novel is very torturous and boring. Pacing is fast outside of fight scenes but then horrendously slow whenever there is a fight.
To early to give this more stars but like the author previous work. And with just 20 pages read I found the story to be engaging. I would like to read more about this story.
First of all, congratulations on writing this. I liked it overall, although I felt a bit strange because of your writing style, which is not bad but still rare to see (something similar) here. Though I'm not very into heroic plots, it was an entertaining read, I wish you keep up your good work.
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