The Stalker's Love

I advise you to re-edit some of the chapters.

I got the feeling that this novel might be good because it reminds me of Leylin Farlier when i saw the word IMMORTALITY . zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz . And honestly though qidian boys , do i really need to put bunch of "Z" every time i comment since i can't comments if there isn't enough letters . Smh

I love this kind of monster trainer romance and from the beginning this romance has remained good, I just think these newer posts have left something to be desired with other people's tournaments and duels, have been too many chapters and it seems like the MC became a bystander.It also seems that the author has forgotten the other 5 koi from MC, which I really hope to see them evolve.In addition, a slight development of the story is lacking as: because Wang Tao trusts Ye Qin so much that he had nothing special about two boys being bullied; even though I was short I wanted an explanation of why Tang Yaling knew it would lose to MC; and lastly, beware of the creation of new powers, such as those rings, which were very sudden and without explanation and development at all.By the way, I'm sorry for my writing, because I'm from Brazil and used Google Translate.

It's just about MC being a side character and getting lottery rewards for successfully completing missions by helping others. The grammar is half decent like 5/10 there's mistakes here and there. The translation is garbage and misleads alot of information.  In any case it's a good read to waste time I just wish the translating was better written.

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Devil 000 if your just gonna post someone else's work on web novel app at least post the entire series up to date this has more than 200 chapters yet your putting only 7 though this is a pretty nice series for all the other degenerates out their

So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this.The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated of those who released daily.From the beginning, things were tad long due to the fact it was wall of text by explaining the system (but some parts of it were handled pretty well like in a form of discussion or brainstorming). But its worth the patience when you go along this novel cause there are lots of character interaction and plot that unfolds.The world-building is adequate, not rushed or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurer in this novel!Thank you author for the job well done. I hope you continue working hard, I'll continue reading and this review shall be subjected to changes as I go along with the chapter that deemed an overall review once more!

Ang Ganda. pero may kulangwalang grind.Naboboringan Ako.Maganda siya kaya lang.Kulang Ng violence.