Great book author! The writing style has no flaws that I could fin, the story is pretty great to read and the characters are well developed as well. Looking forward to more chapters for sure.
Its great and all but how does he know this stuff like how he was going to be reincarnated in the pokemon world or how he knew that the 2 people who reincarnated him where pokemon or how did he know the person he reincarnated as backstory and name? All that i ask is explain how he knows these things? But over all its good read it!
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
The last phrase by the caller looks so much familiar to Micheal Luis. He memorized the caller number and scanned through his brain to remember who it was, Micheal was good at memorizing and recollecting people even if he met them once after five years, but this anonymous caller seems to be slightly different, could it be that he has never met this impromptu caller before??
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