The Silver Pact

It's an amazing story with an exciting plot. Read the story of a girl who was reborn and lives her life again.  Hope you people will like the story

I was really enjoying the story and then for some reason the updates started to get sporadic and they skipped quite a few chapters after ending one on a cliffhanger. Does anyone plan on fixing the missing chapters?

Well, let me start from the top.There isn’t really any character designs. The Author will give a brief description of the characters, like, “she’s cute”, or, “she has long black hair”, but that’s about as desciptive as they get.at the same time, not much information is given about the world the MC is in, the Author has made some passing comments about it, like, “these are the highest martial artist levels”, or like, “there are city masters, and these are how many cities there are in this kingdom”, but again, that’s about as descriptive as they get. The story is kind of only centered around the MC and his thinking and goals, it doesn’t branch off to much else.I‘m fairly new to the novel so I don’t know about the update stability, but it seems to be pretty good.Now, on to the reaso. I’m dropping this novel. I have a personal policy and preference that I will not back out on or change ever. No cucking the MC. Especially if it’s a harem novel. I don’t put up with it. And in case anyone who’s read the novel comes after me, yes, based on what I have read so far, the MC will get cucked. And willingly. For those who will be confused, the MC has stated as of, I believe chapter 15, that he would be perfectly willing, and even happy to get cucked by his own daughters. In case you don’t know, Yuri is when a female has s3xual relations with another female. When this happens in a male centered harem, which means, when the male is the head of house, and he has a harem of females who he is an intimate relationship with. Anyways, when this happens in that kind of relationship, the MC is being cheated on, by his women, with his own women. And this particular MC, is willing and even happy if this were to happen. I draw the line on this action. Yuri is nothing more than the MC being cucked by his own harem, thus, being cheated on, by his own women. Line drawn. Novel dropped.

To be completely honest the Grammer and writing style is not very good. His sentences are  very simplistic and he constantly switches between first person (I) and third person (He). This kind of sentence structure leads to a disjointed and jarring reading experience, making it hard to become immersed in the story he's trying to convey. That being said, at least the author seems to understand this as he tell us that English is not his native language in his synopsis. However, telling this to us up front doesn't make his novel any easier to read.Outside of the writing itself the main character is not very endearing and he constantly does stupid stuff that will make you angry. I can understand to an extent but he makes several large and avoidable mistakes that leaves me wondering if he even has a brain.  In every other aspect hes kinda average without anything making him deep or complex. The same could be said about the plot and setting. It's not great but sometimes stuff happens out of freaking no where, leaving you frustrated. I do enjoy the gaming/leveling aspect of it though. I really like novels with these elements so it appeals to me more so than it might to others.Read this novel only if you can put up with the disjointed writing style, the dumba** mc, and if you don't have anything else to read. It would be a 3, or possiblly even 3.5 out of 5 stars had his English been better or the mc not being so stupid.

Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.

Lu Cheng folds tosses the file on the chair and asks nonchalantly "Where is he?".

He went to find the Chang lady that caught his eye.

It was brutal but I could see that she knew she was dying, and I wasn't going to give her false hope. I could have waited for her soul to leave her body before speaking to her about the deal I wanted to make, your soul always lingered for a while after your death, the time varied, no one had yet figured out when the bond between the body and soul broke, but I decided to start our negotiations before she died, maybe it would ease her death, give her something else to concentrate on.