The idea is really good just needs more polishing in writing and stroy telling. It would had been better to know more about mc in the first chapters. There are times that need more explaining about the things happening but overall all of it can be fixed or with enough time it could be better than now. Keep it up author. Take care.
Isn’t it still ongoing or not continuing anymore?...........…........................................................................................................................................................................
OVERALL IT IS REALLY GOOD, I REALLY LIKE THE CHARACTERS AND THE PLOT IS SPLENDID, I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF IT, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :) SINCERELY YOURS,YOUR NUMBER 1 FANNNNNNN
The story is quite captivating, and it got off to a good start in capturing the attention of the readers. I've read several chapters, and so far, I think the plot is good, and I'm excited to see what happens next. The storyline is well-structured, and it never failed to pique my curiosity about what would happen next.
This novel belongs in the Game novel tag, not eastern fantasy. If you want to read an author who is creatively bankrupt and can’t come up with anything original this is the book for you.Suffers from the: lets take every ability, enemy, etc. from existing works so I don’t have to write anything myself barely.MINOR SPOILER:Also instantly we are met with cliches: unreasonabely powerful when in danger and showing more powerful thing he can choose but he chooses inferior one.Don’t get me started on also straight up copying skill descriptions and character apperances.
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