The Shattered Firmament

"What did they do to you?"

I said yep what a concept

"An' they chased him 'n' never could catch him 'cause they didn't know what he lookedlike, an' Atticus, when they finally saw him, why he hadn't done any of those things…Atticus, he was real nice…"

"Oh Ifritz desu," respond my friend.

The story is very ambitious but I will give credit where credit is due and the direction is going fairly well so i give prob to thatBut the story is going on a neck-breaking speed, is not giving enough time for the reader to be immense into the world and character, i hope there's some breathing room in between.overall solid story

Started reading it for the free pass but got hooked on the story. I hope that the book will be completed fast & quick as it is already clear to me that ML wants FL, who has yet to divorce — too many twists & turns may just turn this into one of the usual books on Webnovel, which would be a shame as it started out quite unique, novel and interesting. I look forward to the next chapters, Author!😊

The writing is good, plot is kind of unique but character development is needed. The main story goes around Iori but still now she is playing the role of weak, inocent woman...

the early chapters got so much description and adjective And you're repeating sentences and thoughts, though I'm intrigue from the story you're making, keep up the good work

This chapter is simply captivating! The way mystery, emotion, and music intertwine creates a one-of-a-kind reading experience. Seojun’s struggle to comprehend his powers feels deeply authentic, and his emotional turmoil pulls you right into his journey. Elias’s calm and supportive nature adds a beautiful contrast, making their dynamic even more powerful. The piano scenes are expertly crafted, with the tension rising and falling, leaving me breathless with every key played. The descriptions are vivid, bringing each moment to life and heightening the sense of anticipation. I love how the story reveals its secrets gradually, keeping me hooked and guessing at every turn. The pacing is perfect, allowing both the characters and the plot to develop naturally.