The Shattered Crown"

Elementary - Fire : 10

'I am already dead…' thought the young women before closing her eyes.

lah kan gak ada tulisannya dimas cowok km mana sy tau... yeeeee

When I finally got a look inside the barrier I could see 15 people in black robes adorned with a white mask.

And we could all use a little change

This is the third book in the series. The first book has been reorganized and published on Amazon. thanks for your reading! The first book turned totally different from the draft version.

So far so good you i also they encounter was well written between the arranged.

Very nice......................

overall the atory is good and everything is fleshed out.... words of improvement would honestly be like more chapters as this story is kinda just beginning. Rn i dont have any qualms about the mc just dont turn him into a psycho killer plz as that would easily ruin him.