Only giving this novel a 5 star because the protagonist is named Fang Yuan from Reverend InsanityStill cry myself to sleep every night after it went on hiatus
Structural Improvements,it takes baby steps to reach big steps. Work on capitalizing your sentences, ie, dialogue."He stood, staring into the empty room known as the abyss room. He wondered if he could ever see the light of day after being trapped here for a century."That's a example I came up with in less than a minute, theres some mistakes but its generally what you want to aim for in your next chapters. Description and details need to also be improved upon.
I have read books but believe when I say this particular one has a unique taste to it. The plot development is creative and intriguing. I love this so much, great job author!
It was an absolutely gut-wrenching story. Every twist hurt more than the last, and you won't really get HOW much it hurts till you read the ending chapter. Everything is miserable in the most well-written way and as a person who pretty much lives for angst, I live for this.Legitimately, I forgot that this app even existed till I remembered this book. Tbh the only reason I keep coming back to Webnovel is FOR this author's works. Thanks a lot for bringing us this masterpiece man. I'm not even going through the same thing as the MC is but it's still comforting somehow.Though the beginning parts might have been a bit cliche, I can't even imagine how it went from that point to where it is now. Man, I love this book
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