THE RULES OF FALLING

The book is amazing & I’ve loved reading all of the books by Moonlight Muse! She’s the most talented author on Good Novel, I’ve read several of her books & a few from other authors, but Muse is definitely the Queen when it comes to writing fabulous stories about this type of story! .........

I don’t know where to start. I guess I should with the most pressing issue, the translation.Review from chapter 39, I’m not a fan.Apparently it was translated by the same people/person that translated ‘The Tycoon God of Online Gaming’. But at least there, it was tolerable. I don’t know if it was the quality of translation or the story, but it might be the latter.Ok, the story. The story is kind of everywhere right now and they don’t go much into detail about the main character and his problems. They only do an overview of it before continuing the story and the bad translations don’t help. They mention other parties but never explain who they are as more parties keep appearing. There are maybe 4-6 different groups of people that are mentioned and I only know stuff about like 2 of them. The other ones seem to be foreshadowing or something but they have only been mentioned once or twice before someone else appears.If you read already I’m talking about the guys who aimed to steal the box, the person who has a boss and the guy who set up the evolution thing and may marry the boss, and the wolves. Those are just some of them.The last one, the wolves are kinda acceptable because it was near the end of the 39 chapters and you get to know a little bit but even then, the author tried to hide every single character behind the scenes with a mysterious mist that ruins the story progression because theres too many of them. It’s also really confusing.And to where the story is headed, not really sure. Just join games and get stronger I’m guessing while all this other stuff happens around him.Ok the writing, as in, the way things play out. Not talking about the story but how fights scenes go and interactions are. They are okay. They may have been slightly changed because of the translations but the humor and the way the main character interacts with other characters and NPCs, is meh.The main characters personality is pretty normal. Oh you want to kill me? Hah! I’ll kill you. Spare you? Nah. He has a hint of arrogance, only a hint, and a lot of energy. Like a stereotypical YouTuber.Basically, I don’t like it, not how the writing goes or the way the author is making things play out. There are certainly others who likes this novel, I’m not one of them.Have a good day, peace.

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