A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
Can anyone tell me the age of the mc at the start of the novel?Depending on the age I might leave this.I'm going to leave for now and wait for more chapters but the first chapter seemed weird. The mc acts like a child yet it also seems to imply he is at least 16, of course my observation might just be ludicrous and he is in fact a child. If he wasn't then I might be a bit disturbed but will continue in the future to see what happens to him.
Legitimately one of the worst things I've ever read. The author constantly messes up their own numbers, changing the ranks of things willy nilly.The story was supposed to be about alchemy, but the author quickly makes the MC perfect at literally everything. Magic, strength, alchemy.The author constantly hammers in how hard it is to fight above your level, yet the MC's alchemical creatures are consistently able to fight 1-2 levels above themselves with extreme ease. Adding on to this, the MC makes a potion to make himself a 3-star expert, but is able to overpower a 5-star expert. How? Bad writing, that's how.Why is it so easy to obtain legendary alchemy materials? Everybody and their grandmothers seem to have a least tier 6 alchemy materials. The materials always have some sort of mythical story behind it, but then the MC magically has 5 more. It's ridiculous.Everything is constantly measured in the cost of gold coins, despite how very very obvious it is that the monetary system is completely made up and the numbers thrown around are entirely random.I'm angry I've wasted any iota of my time on this sack of actual rotting garbage.
That Pea soup fog got me good! The story is very fascinating, and I really love how detailed the announcements are in the chapters! Although I am still at the first few parts of the story, I can tell that this is going to progress as awesome as the book cover of your novel! I cannot wait to read more about this~
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