I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
It's interesting despite being yet another system novel and the world setting in unique too. There are no issues with grammar that I have noticed either.
forgive my bad english..... good novel....at first the cultivations system maybe dificult to understand but its easy after some chapters....many people hate the fact that the mc always wanting to take back his supreme bone... but we must remember that he is just child (less than 12) *who has his toe robbed*.....the mc knows how to make use of resources without waste....in many novels the mc only pays attetion to the core of beasts after killing it, instead of the blood which also has many uses..... also this mc don't have the habit of not eating because he can use some pills or meditanting to fill the stomatch...... i like it when he eats beasts of some arrogant races... hehethis novel doesn't just talk about how heartless the time is like many others... during the progress of the novel we can clearly see the changes in his carefree personality... later on, you see the how big the *wound* left by the yearss within his heart (he isn't anymore the same child with a laugh full of carefree)....well... basically we don't have a mc full luck, *receiving benefits without pain* with some nonsensical encounters.... he figth to have what he have....
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