Cant recommend, its a Machine Translated tradh with little proof reading.Sorry, but this book is just a mtl with very little proof reading. Skill names change from line to line, stat numbers are incosistent or false ( main char had 7 int at the start got 30 more and it became 33. meaning the protag became even more stupid. )This is also a translation work from a qidian employee directly. At the beginning they still did a good job ( even if they destroyed competition in the fan translation market who did decend translations ) but lately they started using mtl more and more and the proof reading becomes worse and worse. I think they found out that some readers are stupid enough to pay for this unworthy translations. They are destroying these books for the international market forever without care for long term profit and only see the shot term earnings.I hope qidian will someday learn there lessons.
A better Fantasy Simulator right there..................................................................................................................................................................................................
The MC is pretty stupid and seems to be mentally retarded, but the story is funny.......Seriously author, could you make the MC a little less retarded and give him the intelligence of a normal person?
i feel like this book could be way better if the author didnt add as much "comedy" as he/she did. it makes the book less intresting and the funny part is, the comedy isnt even good. its just making the story a mess. now i will not say that this isnt a good book but i feel like it would be way better if the author took a more serious look at the story instead of making everything a joke.
Absolutely amazing. I’ve read a ton of light novels, manga, etc. And most are subpar but this is a gem. I love this and I need it to update more. I’ve never sent a gift before but because I liked this novel so much I sent the 200 coin gift. The author needs more exposure because this is absolutely amazing.
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHH ITS A COPY WRITE AND ITS HOT DOO DOO WATER I LOVE BEN TEN BUT WHAT THSI PEROSN DID OS JUST NOOOOO...sorry for yelling but this is a no for me chief
Maybe I'm just too dumb and not used to English (despite being a native speaker), but there are typos, missing words, possibly sentences in the third (or fifth?) chapter. Again, maybe I am stupid, but the English could do with a lot of touch-up. Can't really say anything about the stability of updates. But again, for the last time, the poor English is one of the few bad things about the book.Another would be the chapters aren't actually split into different chapters? I'm not sure if this was done purposefully, but the chapters are split in the middle of the chapter.One more thing would be that quotation marks ("") are missing in some parts, while the closing ones are sometimes substituted for apostrophe's (').Still, not a bad read, just needs a lot of touch-up for me, personally. Otherwise, great story development, could use more detailing (a lot of stories need more of that, though), the poems and creativity are amazing, and it has a unique start, of what I've read.Seriously, if I had an ounce of the creativity the author had, I'd be even better than I am now. A little vain, but who isn't?
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