Reading the first paragraph of chapter 1 had me want to drop asap, skipping to chapter 40 cemented my decision. Rating 1 star.Chapters lack depth, no descriptive writing at all other then basic stuff, lacking in details and most important the story has no flow. I felt this was a creation of a ten year old, the very first paragraph was so lacking and held the most basic description of the main character it was boring.
So... I recommend this novel but not for everyone ....This novel is a MMORPG in space, with a classic system..nevertheless the story and the development of the world is very original, honestly I think it is one of the most original I have seen on WebNovel...That's why this novel is very divisive...It deals with themes in a rather daring way, for example after a while he earns some money...where a classic mc would do everything to optimize his progression, he doesn't...he invests a little in his future and the rest he spends in a rather funny way. ...and that is very revealing of the rest of the story...the MC is not an absolutely perfect strategist hero, who rolls over everyone and the game...He is a very human MC who takes advantage of his reincarnation as a realistic human being would...This is the reason why either we love this novel or we hate it...But in the end for my part I find that the mc has a goal is much more noble than any mc I have read and that makes the MC very very endearing despite this big flaw ...After the level of the development of the space universe..but I find it absolutely incredible at the same level as Legendary mechanicThe only really negative point is that it overflows at the beginning the background of the secondary characters, but I have the impression that it is corrected with time...
It is a complete copy of The Legendary Mechanic not just background but everything. A wannabe Han. You can copy the concept and that would even be great. You could even create fanfiction but for all the things you could do, you just copied whole story. There can never be the second Great Mechanic Han.Should be reported for copyright infringement.
I started reading today this Novel and I see great potential in it especially knowing that Yun Tianlong is not one of those MCs o pursue immortality like crazy.
Was really good at first but the author tried to do too much at once and then forgot about the problems he had already set then introduced worse problems and terrible ways to fix them. also from around ch 160 he started straying from the synopsis he is in a relationship despite not wanting to die for anyone also he doesn’t want to be a loner anymore despite that being the whole point and title. He’s also losing his original thought process and original personality.
I have mixed feelings about the writing, I am on ch 9 and I don't think I understand half of everything I read, because although it looks like good grammar it is deceptively bad, it's structured weird and mistakes are in places where if you read out loud its just wrong, I can't gloss over mistakes in writing, I'm not that kind of reader, the dialogue and quips mc says most of the time I have to read 6 times over to make sure I understood what he was saying, but other than that every character I've seen has a distinct personality, the world although not told in much detail, is very big, and things seem to be happening though I don't understand it
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