Made me chuckle a couple of times, a good read. The MC is very innocent and makes it makes for a good laugh. The system is also interesting since it reminds me of a game that might actually exist within our current age.
The protagonist is a trouble avoiding... well, not exactly. It’d be more accurate if I say cliché avoiding. He has a system that rewards him based on his actions. For example, he meets a girl crying by the river, what does he do? Does he pick something cliché like comforting her? No! He walks away. Example number 2, he encounters two seniors battling it out, what does he do? Does he stick around and wait so that he could maybe pick up some gains after the battle? No! He walks away. Everytime he does that, the system would reward him points. Although the protagonist isn’t avoiding all these just for the sake of avoiding trouble, and is instead avoiding them for benefits he’d gain if he does so, this is still my cup of tea. A protagonist that doesn’t get into trouble volutarily is great!
Deleted it from my library so many locked chapters with no ad options. No thank youSkip it and find something else story is generic enough that you won’t even remember it after a week of not reading it
I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this
Why is this being slept on. Thanks for the chapters. There Fun , abit cliche but fun. Just one Quetion will the Mc have a harem and will Weiwei be a his lover.140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters
... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more
The reviews calling this copy and paste were BS. They obviously only read the synopsis or first chapter. There is a very different story line developing. The system works differently than the other one. The grammar isn't bad. The character, fights and world need more descriptions though. But this seems to be improving too.
So, I usually do not even read on this app, I mostly just write because it’s my passion, but I saw this book and it looked really interesting. Welp. It is. I love when writers open up with a strong and impactful chapter right off the boot, and I hate when it’s those basic “my name is so and so and I’m so and so years old and I look like so and so and this is my life” it’s boorish and boring to read. I love when you set the world and describe the looks of characters through the story itself, not just plainly explaining it, and I can say without a doubt, the opening chapter on this book is phenomenal. It sets up the stage and explains what the world is like, what the people live through, how it all began, gets your intrigued with “what the heck did that?” (No spoiler as to what I’m talking about did what) but it is extremely good and a very intriguing plot idea. Stop reading this review and read the story.. don’t waste precious time. This book is worth the read.
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