The Primordial Record

I really want to like it. It has the necessary ingredients, but it falls flat because the chef doesn't know what to do with them.

There are so many words in every chapter, but nothing of importance is being said.

I read 16 chapters and I've found myself skimming through most of it, as it was mostly pointless nonsense.
And when there's suddenly something interesting going on, the POV suddenly switches to some random dude and his sister, or some random dudes drinking and talking about something. Don't know what, I just skipped past the whole thing.

I don't think I'll continue reading past the first 20 chapters, unfortunately. It's all a convoluted mess and nothing makes sense.
Driving the reader mad with gibberish is a great way for your readers to immerse themselves in your novel, but it's not for me.

The chapters are too wordy. The essence of what the author is trying to convey is lost within irrelevant, long and wordy sentences which could have been phrased in a much better way.

look ur story is good with the mystery etc but come on atleast make it free no other app has ur book fam but hey good story [img=proud]

I kind of like it...
The story, detail, powers, world building and immersion are all great. The only and main problem is the mc. He seems to have a hero complex which greatly takes away from the immersion of the story. It's also strange how he questioned himself for having feelings for his father who he called a stranger because he was from a different world and didn't know that person but not for strangers from a village full of people he definitely didn't know but still risked his life for. I can't help but fear that his need to help and save people will slow him down, bring about extra baggage, danger and unnecessary forced plots.

first of this is a great novel, you have made this novel interesting but too much future information is making the novel hard to read after knowing where he will end up with his powers, if it's like that how about making it short and not too long but interesting in every chapter so one reads it repeatedly and be satisfied rather make more chapters and bore the reader, but all in all this is a great novel i love the different system of power it's refreshing seeing and reading something new unlike all these other repetitive novels, don't drop it keep it up

First of all, I only read the free chapters.. I am not sure if I qualify to review this novel because I only read the beginning of the story, BUT what I respect the most of this novel is the author himself.. He is a very patient and has an extraordinary mindset and manner.. Well, most of the other authors, they are narrow-minded where they REMOVE ALL negative reviews instead of take them as constructive criticism to improve their skill and broaden their views.. It is understandable that not all are constructive reviews.. But I know some are, and most author still block or hide them..

So, don't misunderstand, I don't give this novel 5 star review because of the novel, but because of this author manner and mindset, he deserves this full rating.. He willing take all the criticism in positive ways.. I absolutely respect that.. Unfortunately, this novel is not for me.. I love fast pace novel with OP MC.. Just like the author said, "This novel is not for everyone".. Well, everyone have their own taste and reference.. So, I look forward to your next novel..

Absolute top quality work here. You will only see the full picture once you get to premium. In my opinion this is far more deserving of the top spot than the likes of 'Dark Magus Returns'. The scheming, foreshadowing, power leveling, world building are unravelling into something absolutely amazing. I can't believe that it has so few reviews and that too negative ones. Stick with the novel guys, it'll blow you away. I can't say enough... I'm really disappointed that the community isn't showing this piece of work more love. I hope the author writes this to completion and that he eventually gets the attention he deserves. Side note: change the cover to something more eye catching.

Haven't read the book yet but I like the author's response to criticism. Would surely read, hopefully I don't find a reason to complain

I recently read The Primordial Record and I must say that it was an amazing experience. The story revolves around Rowan Kuranes, who wakes up in a new world inside the body of a dying prince. His new body contains terrifying secrets that he must protect, as it holds the key to eternity. Rowan must learn to harness his new abilities and fight against enemies who will stop at nothing to deprive him of his powers. The novel is a perfect blend of fantasy, action, and suspense, and I found myself completely engrossed in the story from the very beginning. The characters are well-developed and the plot is well-paced, making it a truly enjoyable read. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy novels. Overall, I would give The Primordial Record a rating of 5 out of 5 stars.

The author tried to write something absolutely amazing but in trying to do so he turned this into a mediocre one. The story seems to be inconsistent and it seems like the author didn't really plan ahead(example - soul sizer points turned from 100 to 1000 just to support the authors new declaration that ouroboros wont let a lesser bloodline exist, and I think the author added this point because he might have thought that soul of light and darkness are too burdensome or redundant or overkill to have). A good world build is necessary to make a good story but overdoing it can also ruin the story. This author overdid to the extent that the story is going at a sluggish pace. Moreover worldbuild generally means describing the cities, environment conditions,  their culture, art, architecture, that worlds history etc. but this story's over extensive world build (or gibberish to put it simply) is mostly focused on the unending philosophical pondering of the MC rather than the aspects I stated above

I was just going to read only chapter one but then I git hooked and am still reading, keep it up author

the rating is after 60 chapters. The story had a bit potential, but writing quality is very bad. In the 60 chapters, nothing really happens, and whole chapters with lots of words are wasted in describing tiny details. A very bad writing quality.