half the time you cant tell whats going on its so fast pacedwith things occuring but in the same time it drags waiting to see him get evil or see any sort of system
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Wow, it's the rare occasion where I give a trial novel over 4 stars.The writing quality is good with some translation hijinks. Most impressive is the focus on unique characters and character development. The stereotypical tropes are there, but the author doesn't write into a trap of cliches. There are actually interesting twists. World background is weaker and is mostly developed through the actions of the characters. Just imagine Tang dynasty China, I suppose.It's too early to see where the story goes, and I can see the story just becoming a repetition of the same setup, but I have hope in the author.
the is good story please continue your stored MC is mysterious is good so please no harem and don't make him fool and don't show off abilities to peaple : it will be good if the become group off mysterious?thanks good luck and I love your stored
This novel sounds good it's synopsis is accurate and acceptable. The novel reads well and is an ok translation. I can see a great amount of potential for this storyline. The only real problem with this novel is how short it is.
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