The Phantom's Princess ( A Clean Love Story in a Dark World )

a great book from start to finish... exquisitely exhilarating

From the beginning up to the middle part of the story, it was ok but after that, it becomes a little bit annoying because of continuously using the same details over and over again just to fill in a chapter, not to mention, creating new characters and forgetting the other previously created characters. I also noticed that the author suddenly changing the side characters specialty while not even giving an explanation on how the said character changed its specialty. I was really disappointed when I reached the middle part of this novel up to the last chapter updates, it just contains unnecessary information and keeps repeating details that was already placed over and over again in other previous chapters, making the whole novel boring. I rated it this low because of the disappointment. I for one don't see this novel deserving to be premium.

Writing Quality is good but is over all presented in a awkward manner, Update Stability isn't set in a fixed state and is seem to be done on a whim as updates occur from 1 chapter every 3 days to 1 chapter every 20 days though I would like to add that they seem to be trying to get into a schedule of 1 every 3 days and it seems that they are either doing this for fun or improving their English (So don't bash them to hard). Story Development although unique is still very cliché and straight forward which can be good but only if done right but it still doesn't make it un-readable. Character Design seems to be done without much thought and there characters seem overly simplified and just seem to be slaves to the plot and don't have much thought of their own. World Background isn't explained much could be just because it's to early for them to introduce any of it or they just have no plans to introduce it at all but the author did take time to think of a power ranking system to be put in the world in the auxiliary volume so extra props for that. 3.6/5Overall Review: It's not great It has a comedic charm to it Writing Quality is decent. Update Stability is bad but seems to be improving. Story Develops in a predictable cliché way It's hard to find anything to appreciate about that. Character design other than the comedic charm  (Which I'm not a fan of) is to put it bluntly pretty bad. World Background is by far the best as we see the author has taken the time to construct the 'levels' of the world.Note to the author: Thousands of people are reading your work so people obviously like your stories and my suggest is if you want to get better is to take your time with your work and I guess keep being you so you don't lose that charm. I'm just a idiot so you shouldn't take my words to seriously as I'm by no means qualified to give you advice this is just what I think about your novel.

ok I did read few chapters thinking the mistakes author mentioned would be just a few but sorry... the mc is beyond brain dead.I like abilities, skills even though they are not mentioned properly but I can't imagine an old man with great knowledge having that mentality.well I won't even say it's a great novcuz if you came here thinking it's a novel similar to immortal in the magic world than your dead wrong.the system is already kinda no for me anyways if you like a childish mc go for it

How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked!Keep it up author.

First thing first I love this book so far. Unless I missed some there have been no grammatical errors, while there are some strange events the story development is fluid and well put together and so is the character development there hasn't been too much yet as there only 4 chapters done at the time of this review. Because of how little there chapters are at the moment I can't say anything about the update stability. In terms of the world back ground I don't know much about it because the story hasn't progressed far enough, but after 20 or so chapters I'll come back and update this review. All in all I hope you guys try out this book and have a wonderful reading experience.

The story is good, it's a good read, but SIMP ALERT!!!  MC is an IDIOT!! AND A SIMP!!!

"Wow! You got larger Rexy, just by a week now you grow maybe a meter and a half?!" Kreals exclaimed and also patted the giant before him. Only Larry stood there silently. After playing around for a bit they decided to ride Rexy to avoid fights from the other dinosaurs because they rarely comfronts a T-rex and here they have a mutated one, Rexy here is in the forest is top of the food chain. After several minutes of walking they arrive at a mini desert and welcomed by their father standing in a nearby in a massive whole.