Have read up to chapter 82. I'm giving up on this one. The grammar is bad. The author leaves out random words that change the meaning of the sentence. Constantly uses adjectives in place of nouns. Just plain uses the wrong words...but even leaving that aside, there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT for the MC. Every other character develops as a person, but the MC is completely static. He gets more powerful, and the author EXPLAINS how mature and wise he is. However, he hasn't changed or developed at all since the beginning of the story. I'm done with it.
Good Police Ruined By The Trash Mother Is Superior.... Dictating Mc With Useless Blind Dates Every Chapter It To Annoying And Trash .. Author Ruined A Good Novel ..What A Waste
I have read till chapter 47 and as a fellow author, I appreciate the efforts put down by this fellow author. When you read the story, you will learn that it was written. Yes. And when you imagine the scenes, you will learn that the author also imagined. Yes. (～￣▽￣)～
Dude, how is this an original novel. Its quality is way above that, equal to the top ranked Translated light novels. 140 characters — 140 characters — 140 characters
I grab the snake and notice something, I don't have any clothes so I can just hold this, well I get a better Idea, and I just tie the snake in my arm, now she looks like a thick green shoelace in my arm, maybe I can find more after, these snakes have some mana in their bodies, this should make my status go up if I eat them.
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