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The book is amazing so far, but I think it needs some plot development. I like how the chapters end off on cliffhangers, which I personally like. I wish they could express more details of his rivals, but it's still really good. If this book had an actual Pokemon game with it, with the same storyline, I would buy that game ASAP. DrxpyBoy, I'm really excited for your upcoming chapters! :)
OMG, I really didn't see it coming. Wow, the plot is truly amazing, its a really mesmerizing style of writing and the dialogues...<3Loved it, pls keep the issues on a regular basis!
Sadly starts great then the writer gets lazy and just copy and paste battle scenes only changing names/slight descriptions. I was really enjoying this book until then. π
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