The Path To Goodhood

The best of its weekly trial but unfortunately it wasn't picked I hope it gets picked up again later though

Pretty much garbage. It's poorly translated. If that was all there was to it I may be able to give it somewhat of a pass, but unfortunately the content is just as poor as the translation.

It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.

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Bom vou tentar dizer algumas coisas que deixaria a história melhor na minha humilde opinião, eu gosto de mc fodoes, mas fassa os outros personagem fazerem algo também, não deixe o mc carregar a história sozinha, pricipalemente elena já que ela parece ser a principal interesse amoroso até agora, gostaria de ver um casal forte tanto o homem quanto a mulher, que ela não dependa tanto dele, fassa ele depender dela tambem em futuras lutas, assim a história fica muito melhor do que só o mc fazer tudo sozinho enquanto suas mulheres depende dele, ae elas não conseguem fazer nada, até agora a história tá muito boa, eu gosto muito de romance eu me parece que vai ter um bom, o autor tá sabendo trabalhar a quimicas do casal até agora.Bom trabalho autor continua o bom trabalho e sucesso na suas futuras obras.Ps: gostaria de um harem pequeno bem trabalhado 2 ou 3 garotas ( o mundo tá acabando tem poucos humanos, porque não mais mulheres para almentar a população quando encontrarem um lugar seguro para viver no futuro não, enquanto tiver amor não importa !

Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA

Ahh amazing!!! I don't usually read too much action stories such as this, but because of you, I'm going to start reading! And yours is going to be on the topic of my list hehe. It's awesome! You drew me in with your world building and action. I also loved how it's fast paced and exciting in every chapter and the writing is FLAWLESS. I recommend this to anyone wanting to read a fast-paced, full of action novel. Awesome job author!!!

Nice story . very interestingAmazing backgroundThriller and suspense Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!