The Path Chapter 1

One of those books where the world is created for the MC. The system is there to give him items to solve any hardships. The people are obedient and submissive to him. Everything happens too quickly without any attention to detail. Im getting edgelord vibes from the MC, so I’m gonna call it quits and leave this review.

Welp I only read 5 chapters and it was kinda boring and confusing.The world take place in a modern world where dimensional rifts will appear, basically a portal where monsters will invade the world from.There are multiple grades from G and lower to F and higher (From what I read)Of course mankind can defend against them due people awakening powers. And it seems the mc has awakened clairoyance (Don't if I spelled it right) a long time ago and he is also likes money a lot (The execution is very bad tho)His parents died leaving him with only a sister who is 19 years old.Translation Quality: 3* (3* will be the standard now - sad)SoU: 3* (Each passing year it will only get worse)Story Development: 3* (Although only read 5 chapters, I see no direction)Character Design: 3* (Idk)World Background: 3* (Idk)

this story is best . the best slice of life , well written story, the background setting is well thought ......... .............................. .................................... .........................................

Okay. It had a nice start but it went downhill from there. The writing flow, thought process and actions of the mc and others just don't make no sense in addition to being cringey. The flow is just haphazard although there are some good bits and pieces here and there. Dropping.

LOVE IT!your writing skills are so extraordinary, please teach me.ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Hey, this is author-san ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )I'm here to make an honest review of my story (￣^￣)ゞ First of, the writing quality is average as there is no editor and English is not my first language. You wouldn't read an incomprehensible novel, trust me. It's easy to read and it doesn't have any obvious grammatical errors. I might have a few typos tho ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(;￣◇￣)┘Nonetheless, this baby of mine is an interesting one. Read the first five chapters and you'll see it's not like other novels. It's hard to go through unknown areas of imagination and I don't know where this will take me, but let's hope it's an interesting journey. Please enjoy. (￣▽￣;)

"The captain is here!"

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