The paradox Forge

21 chapters read, overall good story, translation quality (3) is good as in grammar, but five great families of us not a thing (can be waved off as part of the fiction world), repeats already proven statements (might be an emphasize, but it gives more of a repetition effect then emphasize), and some other stuff.Good plot, nice system though ‘divine’ skills, not all deserve the title divine, but still good.Good story development (5).Background (4) build-up is good-ish.Updating stability(5)-probably will stay at 40 for long time thouCharacters (4)-Nice backgrounds for someEnjoyed reading :) (+1 in translation quality)

Honestly amazing and very inspiring..... lololololololopolopololololololololollolloo lololololololopolopololololololololollolloo lololololololopolopololololololololollolloo lol

Where is the system I don’ see it anyw heret

katai katilana novel ........................

Tang Jing said, "This will be all and write down casualties and send some soldiers to take control of the bandit's bases and capture all the things robbed and make sure to tell your subordinate to keep shut about my involvement otherwise their nine generations will be executed."

Smell aside though, this is it. It's time to take a look.. It's time.

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