The Outcast's Legacy System

Wow I’m impressed with your thoughts

I already know that this story is going to be amazing, firstly because Awespect story keeps you on edge practically every chapter ... The cliffhangers make you anxious for more... Secondly, the world and cultivation system are so well built that you'd hope it's real...

I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within.If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too:- Let Me Choose You- Who Are You- Facing Into The SkyThanks🤍🤍🤍

The writing quality is something very hard to find on this app in my personal opinion, and to somehow prove me wrong is this author who does an outstanding job. More frequent updates is what makes understanding the story way easier, not re-reading a chapter to recap, honestly as close to leisurely reading as possible. The story has a great starting point, and currently I'm only at 169 out of 260 something chapters at the moment and I think the author doesn't get as much credit for the way they manage to develop the story at reasonable pace without crazily jumping up all the time. I will say the only downside is that the world background is very in depth for the purpose of understanding, but only to the extent of the MC's understanding. If you've read to the end of this review, I recommend you read this novel because it is like a luminescent sapphire, absolute gem. 💯💯💯

The MC is moron. No really, he is, and even admits to it himself. Now there are ways to write a compelling story featuring a protagonist with that kind of handicap, but unfortunately this novel isn't one of those. It is, and there's no way to put it politely, generic and boring as f*ck. Everything from the characters, to the plot, to the writing is a slap dash, uninspired waste of both your time and fast passes (in case anybody can even slog through to reach the premium chapters). Give this one a pass. A hard pass.

It's good I really liked the story, I like FL more than ML she is more courageous when it comes to love but MC acts like an idiot.You should have locked chapter after chapter 60, It's too soon to lock the chapter.

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